Thanks to the translator for picking this up!

This may be the hottest Ka Biqiu novel besides Outside the Law. Short, sweet, and interesting pairing. The MC gets 'adopted' (sort of, it's not a real, legal adoption, more like being someone's ward) by a rich gangster after his scummy biological family tries to sell him as a prostitute to clear their debts. The MC is beautiful and pure-looking, but in reality he's an orphan brat who can fend for himself. He's 16 a the start of the novel when he meets the ML and the one who ~~gets obsessed~~ *cough* falls in love with the ML, so no grooming on the ML's side even though he's more than 10 years older than the MC. Push-pull dynamic and dubcon:

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Mostly the MC dubconning the ML because he gets fed up with waiting for the ML to do him and feeds him aphrodisiac to get things rolling - the ML gets out of control (partly because he's been holding back for a long time waiting for the MC to come of age, partly because he's angry that he's fed aphrodisiac, which is pretty fair to be upset about). Rough sex, but they both end up enjoying it and it fixes their relationship.

No noncon and both MC and ML are very willing (and horny) when they finally do the deed. The ML makes sure the younger MC knows what he's getting into.

The ML has yandere-like tendencies, but keeps them in check. He's very caring when it comes to the MC, and they complement each other well, since the ML is a domineering CEO-type of gangster boss and the MC isn't exactly what you'd call normal, but he's probably the only one who can provide a real challenge for the ML.

Good story if you like MCs with a daddy complex and large age difference between MC and ML, but consensual romance. Ka Biqiu is very good at writing complex characters and interesting relationship dynamics. Plus hot smut (hehe).

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13 Feb '23 Edit: Added the extra chapter that came with the physical book!

It is a very short story so it was pretty plotless. The main focus is on how the relationship developed between the MC and ML.

The MC really keeps you reading because he's just such a darling. He had a rough start but it didn't make his personality any much lesser. He is someone who dares to chase after his wants and puts his words into actions. I like it when the shou actively chases after the gong.

Also, because of the adoptive relationship between MC and ML, MC had to call ML daddy in front of others. However this "daddy" ended up being used when he's selling his cuteness or in bed which is really seductive. The smut was pretty good in this.

The ML really dotes on him a lot too. You can see how protective he is for him and that really makes your heart melt.

Overall, it is a light hearted read with no dogblood and drama.

This novel is just *chef's kiss* perfecto. This is just my cup of tea eheheheh step daddy x son uwu the smut is hawtt lol 🤩

I wish there were more chapters.

Anyway thanks to the translator, you did great! The updates were also quick.

One thing about Ka Bi Qiu stories is that the synopsis always makes them sound perverted, but they are actually really sweet. In this case, the synopsis suggested that MC and ML were like father and son, and ML raised MC, but in reality, they were just two lonely people who needed love and company. Yes, ML adopted MC, but it was an impulsive decision in order to save MC. I can't see ML as a father figure; he is too young and is like a teenager himself. He cares about MC, but calling him father is too far-fetched.

The story itself revolves around MC and ML's relationship. There were a few unpleasant moments, but nothing nerve-wracking; there isn't any angst, and generally, it is a good read. Because it's so short, things aren't dragged out endlessly.

I liked that despite the story being so short, MC and ML backgrounds were shared, characters were well-rounded and lovable, they felt real, and one could feel their emotions. MC is young but mature for his age (because of his background), but also a bit rebellious, which is normal for his age. I think he is used to being independent, and no one really cares for him, so he acts wild (but nothing unacceptable). ML is ruthless but is nice to MC and dotes on him. I think he himself hasn't grown yet, despite being older than MC, he isn't mature and isn't ready to be the father of a teenager. I loved that both were imperfect and made mistakes, but of course everything ended well.

I want to thank the translator who picked up this story and shared it with us and was so meticulous with notes and explained everything in detail.

Don't understand the low ratings, really enjoyed the story.

I don't care what anyone says, I really like the MC. He doesn't take sh*t and he's strong af. He's the type to be stubborn and reckless, but he always follows through with what he says. He's never indecisive and I stan. I love people like that. His personality never changed either even after falling in love, so it's *chef's kiss*. It's also nice seeing the black-bellied ML being pursued and being somewhat flustered. Nice for a short, kinky read.

Can’t say there is anything very special. And the story itself is short, so there is a time skips and not much of emotions and events. I think this gave me a feeling that all was too plastic. I wanted to see more of emotional development from both sides. It was too small.

In genera, quite mediocre read. With incest. Be aware.

This story was pretty good. Binge-read it for one day and I definitely don't regret it.

First, the story can't be said to be perfect. It has its own flaws. Given the fact that it almost crossed the taboo theme of p*dophilia, I wouldn't be surprised if others feel uncomfortable.

However, if you're planning to read, I would like to remind that MC was 16 when he was adopted. Celebrated his 17th birthday with a pure relationship. Spoiler

They realized their feelings months after his birthday. They had their first s*x a year after which means he's at least 18 years old, an adult, before doing it.

Their emotional development was also satisfying. It wasn't dragged too long. No unnecessary drama or any of the sort. It was ML being clueless with his feelings and MC facing it open-mindedly.

I think what I am a little dissatisfied with is

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ML having s*x with his ex-girlfriend. It's actually not wrong because he's basically single. I guess it's the fact that I didn't expect him to have s*x with his "ex" again and to have an ambiguous relationship. Also, at that time, I thought they were planning to rekindle their relationship. Fortunately, they didn't and his ex never bothered them again.

Regarding the characters, MC has a bottom line. He was headstrong that was common for youngsters. After living with ML, this trait of him didn't vanish. Despite not being socially equal, he actually stands an equal foothold with ML. He's also straight-forward- with his confession, his likes and dislikes, and things he was dissatisfied with. He won't let others decide for himself, and fight for what he wants. Basically, he knows when to advance and retreat.

Meanwhile ML, even though he was domineering and used to having the power over others, he respects the MC. His decisions, actions, and even encourage to have an open communication with MC. He doesn't decide for MC, but rather listen to his suggestion and decide on a consensus for the both of them.

Overall, it was a good light-read if you're looking for a short one.

Kinda short and I was actually expecting for more of their relationship. I want to see how they will live their lives together after this.

The plot seemed interesting but I can’t stand the MC. He’s not that smart at all, rebellious, really flamboyant (in a bad way) and selfish

I love this omg as expected of this author. I love her CPs because the progress in feelings is really there. The characters are always so so flawed but they find growth through love.

Here, the age gap is pretty wide and the relationship started while MC was still a minor. BUT he was definitely not groomed lol if anything, he groomed the ML 😂😂😂 ML was actually quite reluctant but of course, he eventually gave in to MC 😂😂😂😂

But MC is not dumb and blinded by his dependence and love for ML either. From the very beginning, although he was financially dependent on ML, emotions-wise, he already had his own principles and ideas and he stuck with them too. Even after they got together, he knows his worth, understands his own feelings, and makes his own decisions. I especially love the last extra.

Anyways, it's a good read. No dog blood. No prolonged misunderstanding. 10/10 will recommend!

The plot seemed interesting but I can’t stand the MC. He’s not that smart at all, rebellious, really flamboyant (in a bad way) and selfish