After I Became an Omega, I Caressed the Campus Hunk’s Dragon Tail
After I Became an Omega, I Caressed the Campus Hunk’s Dragon Tail
By Di Yu
Completed
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76 Chapters
3.78
27 Reviews
Shi Yu has a secret – he is a dragon’s mate from the other world. He builds nests, collects gold coins, and dreams of meeting dragons. As a result, Shi Yu became the newest white moonlight after his differentiation into Omega. Being confessed for N+1 days, he refused people, saying, “I only like dragons.” Passing by, was the most beautiful male on campus. Jiang’s footsteps lurched. Jiang ChengLi has a secret – he is an ice dragon. As the flower of the high mountain, the entire school’s little omegas dream of being marked by him. Jiang ChengLi has never been attracted to any Omega pheromones until he had a charming dream after hitching a ride with a newly differentiated Omega. In the dream, the Omega kissed his dragon horns, rubbed his dragon belly, and held his slimy dragon tail! Later, Jiang ChengLi’s pheromones went out of control, he turned into a small dragon cub and was picked up by the Omega in his dream! Shi Yu picked up an ice dragon cub. Snow white body, round belly, super-soft tail. He put the dragon cub into his pocket then kissed the little horn, rubbed the belly and tail before going to bed. Later, the ice dragon cub turned into Jiang ChengLi, his tail winding around his feet, “Let me bite you, I’ll give you all of my tail.”
CH 1
I don’t have another place to vent so I’ll just do it here.
I absolutely hate how in the ABO world omegas are seen. We’re still trying to stop the sexism in the real world and some people still keep on making books and stories where some people are obviously looked down upon just because of their gender. I hate how omegas in this story act like being weak is their only personality. In most of the ABO books it seems like it is. I wouldn’t go around saying people ”oh I’m a super weak omega who will die of the thought of acting like a normal person I just can’t do sports”.
In this book the omegas and alphas are in different classes. It can be smart if for example someone went into their heat and all but no, in this story the protagonist was all the time in heat which seemed like it didn’t do anything else than just smell nice. And also where are the betas? The school had two classes for alphas and one for omegas, where are the betas? There was obviously betas in this story but they just don’t go to school? I also hate how they were playing like basketball or football and the omegas were just cheering. Why didn’t the omegas play sports? THEY’RE NOT THAT WEAK, they’re humans too. It’s not like playing with ”oh so strong” alphas will kill them.
Yeah I still understand there are people who like this setting, but like have you ever been told you can’t do something just because of your gender? ’Cause that’s a real thing y’know.
The author said this was just a light hearted novel tho. I undersand it.
Let the journey looking for a realistic ABO continue
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2023-07-11
CH 13
Ok here's the thing.
Pros:
-ML and MC are good characters who aren't so 2 dimensional
-The ABO element is cliche but the author made it believable in their world
-Translation is terrific
I really wanted to like this story...
Cons:
-Bad guys are super obvious and brainless. No one passed the common sense test. Below negative point IQs.
-Omegas are basically flimsy walking bags of hormones in this story
-MC had a 180 degree personality change and NO one questioned it
-MC was made out to be this cold badass character but he's constantly in heat, constantly forgetting to use blockers or they just don't work
-Alphas have no flaws. Hormones don't affect them. All it does is allow them to smell omegas and they are still 100% rational but chooses to be rapists. But obviously only the good guys choose to be good every other alphas turn into a mol*ster
-ML is always conveniently there to save MC because MC is always affected by hormones to even do anything but constantly become a victim
-The setting change is confusing as hell. One minute they're in one place, in the same breath they're suddenly somewhere else. The bridge between settings is nonexistent.
I feel like we gave this story such high ratings cuz exiled is translating but it's a really sub-bar read.
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2023-07-11
CH 1
First off all, as of today I'm dropping this story. For multiple reasons, the first one being the translation is horrible and as a native English speaker my brain short circuited through the entire story.
Second, I get that the other prefaced this by saying she wrote this at a very juvinile age but this is just bad. The amount of sexism, and power imbalance in this story will make you cry bloody murder
Spoiler
The ML treats the MC like dung until he realizes that the MCs pheromones are the only ones that can suppress his alpha period basically
Spoiler
Omegas are constantly treated like women from the Victorian age and I bet author San thinks it's cute smh and what the heck is up with that A2 class, do u just become scum when u enter that class? If so then I think that class is haunted by a s*upidity and sexist ghost and needs some serious exorcism
Spoiler
MC and the ML don't feel like a couple, their just weird to me. MC dreams of some dragon transmigrates and is like oh well my other dragon is gone might as well just take this one. MC doesn't like ML in my opinion and ML likes possessing mc
Third, the author could've gone in so many directions with the Omega thing, like when we see that MC isnt so weak. She could've made it so other Omegas see that it's possible to not be so weak and let the MC defend him self in some situations but instead whenever the MC is about to win a physical fight with an alpha we just see another MC obsessed alpha swoop in and save him??? That honestly just pissed me off like?? "move over Omega this is a job for a true alpha" smhhh
Fourth, I've seen some brain dead conon Fodder but this story really tops the cake, they seemed to just exist for the sole purpose of making the ML look good and the MC to seem more tragic
And finally
Spoiler
the mom popping up from overseas and being like, I'm sorry I left you with your dad when we divorced but like, I have a new family now and you're not that important but like we can be a family again let's have dinner! Was so dumb lmao. And the MC is like omg in my previous life I didn't have a mom and he agrees lol then the mom just fades away as the author forgets she existed...
Anyway, I don't know why there's no mtl tag on this because the translation is just horrendous. I have copious amount of respect for translators who work so hard to give us these wonderful stories but I deslike those who use horrible machine translate just to get... What? Views? Attention idk
Translation+ plot = ⭐ half a star for each =one star in total. Horrible read
8
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2023-07-11
CH 1
It was good! Had the heart-aching feeling the entire way not because there's angst, but because the ML likes to sulk alot when he doesn't receive affections haha! The MC is a cold type of beauty, although he knows when to give and when to appease, he's very conservative!
The plot doesn't actually arrive until:
Spoiler
The MC willingly gives his memory away to the ML's mom, I advise other readers not to look at the plot holes and little bugs in the story too closely - and just enjoy it as it is (if you can!)
I had a good time anyways, don't expect too much but just enjoy the ride as you read if you can!
5
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2023-07-11
CH 1
This novel is like"Pay Attention to Me" vibe. Both MC and ML is like bobba milk tea, cold and sweet. Oopps, that their favourite, even thought ML got drunk by drinking that (・∀・). And MC always "Please let me spoil your dragon form!!! (≧▽≦) " And "Please, don't disturb me, President ಠ_ಠ". The difference treatment betwen dragon form and human form ╮ (─▽─) ╭
5
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2023-07-11
CH 1
If we were allowed half stars this would be a 4.5. Only because, as the author acknowledges, there are some messy plot parts of the story and not everything fits. Despite that, it's a quite enjoyable story.
This is the kind of ABO I like to see, where being an omega doesn't mean the MC is a wilting flower, in fact several times he punches out some nasty alphas. He's also very independent. Even better, it's these characteristics that the ML appreciates, his strength and smarts and that he's not like other omegas in that he's willing to stand up to him.
Except when he's a dragon. I think it's safe to say that the MC has a definite dragon fetish. If you took a cat fiend and showed them a kitten, that's the reaction the MC has when he sees a dragon. His brain turns to mush. It's pretty funny. Especially how the ML reacts.
It's not a deep story but it's a sweet story and a good way to spend the afternoon.
3
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2023-07-11
CH 1
Okay, first of all, I honestly don't understand what everyone is yammering about this novel being so bad and so forth, let me give you the reasons:
Warning, spoilers ahead!
  1. A/B/O setting
The complaints about the Omega's capability or more like incapability against defending themselves from alphas due to pheromones, dude, its an ABO world with no sci-fi genre... what did you expect???
There are already a special system to protect omegas and seperate them from alphas to better protect them at school where the students are still immature and impulsive, there are inhibitors that can be provided by the gov to the legal guardians for the omegas, and there are treatments to allow the cancellation of a permanent mark (so it's really not actually permanent) though it comes with long recovery time.
And although the omegas are often treated as fragile and physically weaker, they are not receiving this treatment from the society as a whole coz they're being looked down upon. Also, when the MC showed his athleticity, nobody in their school aside from his opponents tried to put him down by saying how can an omega be so rough? Omega's job is to just stay still and look pretty/depend on an alpha.
This is one of the few novels where there is no emphasization on discrimation against omegas and betas for their basic rights as a human being (higher education, marriage, child bearing, work).
And while throughout the story there are plenty of Alphas with less than stellar attitudes towards omegas, there are many more that simply treats them as precious, admirable and respectable fellow human beings (especially if they're good looking but that's just human nature)
If you wanna complain about how alphas could take advantage of multiple omegas by marking them, just so you know this exist IRL life too, Stockholm syndrome is a thing for a reason, you can say all you want about how it is different in omegas' case cause of pheromone and all that but psychological manipulation is no less lethal...
As for MC's father, stepmom and stepbrother's action of trying to sell MC for benefits, while this could be attributed to him differentiating into an Omega, in a normal story with no ABO setting, MC could still have been sold for his looks, bcoz, yes, such disgusting people actually exist...
And in term of MC and ML's realtionship, I like how both their parents actually only allow them to truly have their own house after they are adults and they were also supportive without being too overbearing or annoying (no insinuation of MC belonging to ML since ML already gave MC multiple temporary marks, no pressure about grandchildren, MC's mother even caution MC several times about his relationship with ML).
Oh, and MC's friends were also very supportive of their ships but not by pressuring MC, one of MC's friends even complained about how MC was so soft-hearted to treat ML so well when he thought ML dumped MC which is sweet.
So yeah, all in all, I don't think this story shows a huge power imbalance bet. the three secondary genders, in fact, it is quite an open society.
  1. Power imbalance bet MC and ML
People, let me just ask you, bet a man and a woman for example, women will always fall short in term of physical strength unless they have special training, right???
So it is up to the man to be mindful of his strength and treat his partner with respect (not that it means the physically weaker partner shouldn't have the same attitude, but you get my point).
In the case of MC and ML, I can safely say, while the ML certainly has the power and resource to force MC, he never did. ML was always upfront with admitting to MC about his extreme possessiveness but he never actually acted on it. He's a dominant alpha, richer, and stronger, but throughout the story, while he did eat MC's tofu many times, he never went too far and the moment MC strongly express his rejection, ML will stop.
He'll sulk, ofc, and tempt MC with his dragon form but the the fact that MC actually indulge the ML's bouts of sulking and temper by coaxing him once MC realized he really did hurt the ML is proof that their relationship is consensual and the ML truly respect the MC's boundaries. Even after they really started dating, the ML didn't pressure the MC and simply teased the MC from time to time. In fact, the one who initiated to be more intimate was MC.
  1. The memory loss
Some ppl say this plot twist came out of nowhere and was unnecessary but I think this plot point was crucial to make MC and ML's relationship a healthy one.
Since they started off with codependency due to the contract and subsequently 100% pheromone match due to said contract. And MC was barely acclimatizing to his transmigration, let alone his new status as an omega before he was first given the temporary mark by ML (even if MC gave his consent for that, I truly doubt he truly understood what he was going into since he just became an omega then).
And their relationship at first became intimate way too fast due to ML's dependency on Mc's pheromone, so the memory loss happen just at the moment I started feeling uncomfortable about their relationship/feelings-being genuine or it's just the pheromones talking-and gave them a fresh start which proof ML's sincerity, dedication and patience when it comes to his feeling for MC and it also show that ML always try to respect the MC's boundaries.
And MC's feelings were also able to develop properly for ML due to ML's character and his efforts to chase after MC instead of the MC just being swept away by their situation, pheromones and past contract.
So, yeah, definitely one of the most healthiest relationship you can find among ABO novels. Scratch that, even in normal world settings, the relationship bet. MC and ML is one of the healthiest relationships you can find, what with the super popular yandere tropes running rampant in BLs... Right, I forgot, yandere ML are popular too in heterosexual novels...
Edit: Almost forgot, thnx translator, you did a great job!
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2023-07-11
CH 1
I really put up with it and read everything to the end. Damn it.
I have much more criticism than praise for this novel, but if you want to read it, know that:
  1. Common and sexist ABO world. That is, omegas are always in danger of being marked by alphas. The most common universe for ABO, where omegas are fragile and inferior.
  2. MC is the cold protagonist type. The kind that should be cool, but for some reason can't safely store its inhibitor, and is always being saved from being mol*sted by others.
  3. I don't know if I can say it's a cute romance. I mean, if you consider ML cute chasing a cold MC almost every story, then yes, it's cute. Or his dragon form makes it cute. Well, the relationship is basically one step forward and two steps back. For being cold, and other usual reasons, the MC will basically not give a damn (or pretend he doesn't) about ML for most of the novel. Only caring about his dragon form. And so ML, after falling in love like a dog, dragon lol, loyal lives his life chasing him.
  4. And what really pissed me off a little:
Spoiler
when their relationship seems to go somewhere, the author makes the MC lose his memory. Yes, it's a story with that kind of twist. So we went back to ML running again to make MC fall in love with him all over again.
In conclusion, it's not the best or worst story I've read. But I won't read it again.
2
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2023-07-11
CH 1
Cute fluffy story about high school life between the Chosen One of the Dragons and a dragon.
The MC Shi Yu transmigrates from his world (with dragons) to an ABO world (without dragons). In this new world, the omegas are very weak physically and are often handicapped by hormones and their estrus. They are also subject to arrogant and often threatening behavior by the physically dominant alphas. Readers who don’t like this type of power imbalance between the genders should not read this story.
Shi Yu starts out as a beta that differentiates into an omega shortly after his transmigration. Because he’s from another world, Shi Yu does not act like a typical omega. He is fierce, cold, and a fighter.
I thoroughly enjoyed the first part of this story with a group of great friends/classmates, a super cool ML, and the taking down of evil characters. There were also some really cute moments in the second part of the story but I felt that it could have been a better story without a particular trope
Spoiler
amnesia - some things got dragged out after this
. Therefore, this is a 4 out of 5 stars.
2
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2023-07-11
CH 1
Okay. Here is my honest review. The story is good and is full of fluff. I love the ML so much. And just as I said, the story is good, but not until..
Spoiler
The MC lost his memories, it's so random and a very unnecessary element that I think the author just threw out of nowhere
And the translations is okay, but some of it were structured badly, like there are some sentences that doesn't just make sense, it's very unlikely for RebelScans to translate badly, so it was very unexpected. But overall, it's understandable.
2
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2023-07-11


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