Sign-in Marvel
By Fānqié Jiān Xīhóngshì
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223 Chapters
⭐2.00
6 Reviews
Sign-in to get T-Virus, sign-in to get Haki, sign-in to get magic, sign-in to get ninjutsu.
This was a story of a Hao Yun who use the sign-in system to sign-in, step by step from ordinary people to superheroes!
“Thanos get ready I’ll sign-in to defeat you!!”
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CH 10
First take after 10 chapters: It's badly written.
None of the characters in the story react like real people would.
----- Full Review (thus far)
To explain what I mean with an example:
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The MC's adopted mother learns from her son about the dangerous future, and also discovers that he had some level of powers. So what does she do?
Encourages him to fight by himself against a terrorist group. "You're strong enough now you can probably protect Mr Stark" basically.
This from the adopted mother that raised him for 16+ years.
Our MC has some basic electricity powers and peak human fitness. A bullet can easily kill him.
Yeah... no. I can't suspend my disbelief for such egregious writing. That's not how a real mother would react to the things he's said and done, period.
There are many other examples, in-story, that I'm not going to bother to list.
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2/5
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Note: 2/5 instead of a 1/5 because the plot seems like it could've been a fun and interesting Marvel fanfic... if only it was written better.
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2023-07-17
CH 1
Bad part: Hard to read in parts, mostly due to the author's use of Chinese idioms. MC is the typical loser gains cheat but still acts like a Dick.
Good part: I like the genre and the author seems to be weaving the story into the existing world well.
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2023-07-17
CH 75
Had a decent start, was partially acceptable and midly readable. It was a typical powerfantasy fanfic with "I know about x event and x person" kinda theme.
What made me drop this is the otherworld arc. Okay, otherworld arc is understandable but the author did not only go to a world that is so far from marvel Spoiler
naruto world
he even shat on said world by basically making a BS illogical and rushed side story.
The otherworld side story basically showed the flaws in this authors writing.
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Other fanfics would respect source material to a degree. Afterall the authors of said fics were mostly fans. But this author is most likely not a fan and just wanted to earn some pocket money by writing some random powerfantasy tr*sh. He neither understood the powersystems nor did he understand the storylines. He probably just scrolled through the wiki and copy pasted shig without understanding it.
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Storytelling is a mess, I know these kinds of authors. They probably have some grand image in their minds and some complex storyline with dialogue happening in their imagination but since they're too lazy they end up writing a summary. TLDR: author thought up some amazing moving scene but said tldr this happened.
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Obvious milking, look the novel is titled Sign-in Marvel, but at chapter 75 almost 50% of the story happens in another world. 40 something happened in MCU the rest happened in
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naruto
world. I know how good otherworld systems are but unlimited anime works and shoujo grand summoning honestly did it better. Heck god of soul system, as bad as it is, by far did much better than this novel.
- Finally, this is the last sin-flaws in the authors writing. POV, scene selection, tone, character development and basically all of the basic elements in writing. I don't want to act like a bit*h but this fic honestly got me triggered and I'm someone who could read 1000 chapters of absolute garbage. Now think about it, I could read 1000 chaps of garbage but this fic made me drop it at 75 chaps.
P. S. Even for a time waster this novel is not worth it. Skip this one and read some other fic, heck reread other fics sincw those would be better than this dumpsterfire of a fanfic
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2023-07-17
CH 176
It started off well in my opinion typical child raised in New York marvel universe. Later on around chapter 80, we start seeing more and more praise for a certain country all in all that doesn't bother me the author has a right to lift up their home country. Later on, we start seeing more nationalism and propaganda involved. At one point the MC makes a comment about not understanding the American mindset like he wasn't raised in New York. All in all, I just couldn't handle it. In my opinion, it almost felt like the MC changed to a different character midway through for no reason. If you want to read it have at but I am done with it
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2023-07-17
CH 81
At first everything was going well. Although there were some illogicalities in the plot, it was bearable. But as we approached the eightieth chapter, the author began to praise a particular country for its national identity and exaggerate its power. The story has lost its flavor. A beautiful fanfiction topic destroyed by the author. You can try reading chapters eighty and eighty-first directly to see what I mean.
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2023-07-17
CH 108
Tbh, I don't know whether I am reading marvel fanfic with chinese element or xianxia with marvel element...
There is simply too many things I want to comment, and I keep holding on but I am really tired of reading this, not to mention I don't even know where to start.
Just.. just... ughh, just try to read it, and you will know what I mean.
Overall, 1 star
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2023-07-17
