Yesterday I spent a very nice time shopping for pottery, as for todayâŠ
After breakfast, I stared into space for a moment, wondering what I should do⊠[1] shop some more? Or-
âAlright, letâs go to the dungeons,â announced Fer as he stood up, [1] looking very heroic and⊠wait-
âHah? What are you saying all of a sudden?â Was this a result of yesterdayâs conversation? [2]
âYour talk with those new Adventurers yesterday, it takes only 10 days to reach the dungeon if we walk. I bet I can get us there in less than 10 days if we go right away [3].â
No, no, no, weâre not âgoing right awayâ.
I know that Anton mentioned thereâs a dungeon south of Neihoff in a city called Avering, but-
â[4] This and that has nothing to do with each other! Moreover, wasnât Fer the one who said they wanted to go to the sea? Letâs go to Verulean, the City by the Sea. Donât you want to eat the delicious Kraken and Sea Serpents?â
âOf course, but between the sea and the dungeon, I much prefer dungeon challenges.â
Ehhh⊠what are you sayinggg�
First, you want to go to the sea, and now you want to go to the dungeon. [5] What about me? I have plans too!
âNo, no, no absolutely not. Fer is the one who brought up the sea trip first, so thatâs where we are going. I want to buy seafood from Verulean. Just think of all the ingredients from the sea we could buy there. [6] Think of Seafood Barbecue!â
âNu, seafood⊠when you put it that way, itâs kind of hard to give it up, na.â
Thatâs right, thatâs right, just keep your mind on all those delicious seafood.
âVery well, then itâs decided. We shall go to the sea first and save the dungeon for later.â
No, no, thatâs not what I meant. [7]
âI donât want to go to the dungeon! Didnât we just go to a dungeon at Doran? We even cleared the whole thing, isnât that more than enough?â
âWhat are you talking about? Dungeons are the best places to level up. Moreover, itâs good for exercise. Itâs like killing two birds with one stone.â
âWhatâs this about killing two birds with- anyway, I refuse to go.â
âHumph, youâre the only one who doesnât want to go. Oi, Dora, Sui, wanna go to the dungeons?â
Eeh? Why are you bringing those two in?
Unfair!
âDungeon? Of course!â
âSui wants to go to the dungeon~â
âUmu, excellent, excellent. Heheh, oi, Dora and Sui are with me on this.â
Grrr⊠whatâs with that triumphant look on your face⊠This is cheating, you know? Cheating!
âNo, no, I refuse,â
âEehh, come on, come on, letâs go to the dungeon. Didnât we have fun at the last dungeon? I want to go again, you know?â
I guess⊠the dungeon was a fun place for Dora-chan. Donât you know that Adventurers literally risk their lives challenging those places?
âSui wants to visit the dungeons too~ Sui wants to pew pew lots of enemies~â Sui bounced excitedly in place.
Grrr, this Fer really knew how to turn both Dora-chan and Sui against me.
âMaster~ please~ Sui really wants to go to the dungeon again ~â
Sui-tanâŠ
I have lostâŠ
There is no way I can refuse when you ask me that way~ [8]
âHaaa⊠I understand, weâll go to the dungeon later,â I just canât win against Sui-tan.
âFuhahahah, excellent decision.â
âOoohhh, dungeon! Weâll be going to the dungeon! Yes!â
âThe dungeon! The dungeon! Yaay~â
Well, as expected, the terrible trio were super excited.
âA new city meant new people and new dungeons, Iâm really looking forward to it!â
âAah, I wonder what kind of monsters weâll be facing? Maa, Iâm sure they wonât be a match for us, but itâll still be fun!â
âSui is excited too~ Sui wants to pew pew lots of enemies!â
Well, it looked like everyone else was really looking forward to exploring a new dungeon.
âAah, everyone. Please be reminded that we wonât be going to the dungeon right away [9], alright? Weâre going to the Verulean first.â
At this, Fer said, âIn that case, letâs head over to the sea now.â
This suggestion was shot down immediately. âHey listened, we rented this place for a whole week. I refuse to leave after just spending half the time here. Weâll go the day after tomorrow.â
Iâm not going to waste the paid-up rent for this place. Iâve compromised enough with you guys. Itâs not easy to get to live in a place like this, and I want to enjoy the bath here for as long as I can.
Now that weâve settled on our plans, todayâs schedule has been decided. A long journey meant being on the road often. That means I should take advantage of this mansionâs lovely kitchen and make some pre-cooked dishes for the trip. [10]
A day after we agreed to visit the dungeon, I had already made some of the standard favourites: Fried Pork Cutlet, Fried Chicken Cutlet, Karaage, Salisbury Steaks, Sliced Meat Marinated in Miso, Minced Pork Soboro, various stir-fried vegetables as well as other dishes that go well on rice. I pre-cooked lots of rice and kept them in different pots for convenience sake. Hmm, maybe I should get more pots? [11]
Despite being plagued by Fer and the rest for food at random intervals, I managed to get everything done in one day. However, the cooking spree meant that my raw meat supply had gone down by a lot.
The Bloody Horn Bull and Wyvern stock had gone down to about a quarter of the original amount. It would probably last us till Verulean, but Iâd have to restock large quantities of meat and seafood when we get there.
[Gumihou: Ahahaha, Mukouda-san, you wonât escape the dungeon ~]
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[3] Adjusted Inconsistent Information: âYour talk with those new Adventurers yesterday, it takes only 10 days to reach the dungeon if we walk. I can travel 10 days, letâs go right awayâ Er, Fer would most likely take less than 10 days, so adjusted.
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[6] Structural Change: âThink of Seafood Barbecueâ was originally a thought by Mukouda, but I thought it would be more impactful in the dialogue so moved it up.
[7] Deleted Repetitive Information: The no, no, no to dungeon appeared in both thoughts and dialogues repeatedly, deleted some of them.
[8] Zzonkedd: Ahhh, Sui-tan must be so cute here~
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