Apologies for the delay everyone. I started watching and got addicted to Game of Thrones.
Question: How do you want character dialogue to be handled?
Case 1: Yoraikun does not add the names of the people speaking because it doesnât have it in the RAW. Itâs easier when reading Japanese, but youâll have to figure out whoâs talking by context. Shouldnât be too too hard though.
ie. âHey kids!â
âHello, Uncleâ
âSup, old manâ
Case 2: NetBlazer adds the names in parenthesis after the dialogue. ie. âHelloâ (Person A)
Case 3: XCrossJ has the name of the individual speaking, then the dialogue. ie. Person A: âHelloâ
For this chapter, Iâll be using XCrossJâs format for consistencyâs sake.
Also, looking on the Terms poll on the Chapter 44 page, it seems like âJapaneseâ and âBothâ are fairly close together. Iâll use both as there may be readers who may not know the meaning of certain terms, but please feel free to suggest alternative ways I should format it.
Arnold: âAre you alright, Muir?â
Muir: âNn⌠Eh? E-Eh!?â
Muir doesnât understand why she was lying down and becomes confused. However, she suddenly gasps and remembers about how she had just been in a game with Rarashik.
Muir: âUm⌠IâŚâ
Arnold: âDo you remember now?â
Muir: âY-Yes⌠U-Um, the gameâŚâ
Muir looks towards Rarashik with an uneasy expression on her face. Seeing that, Arnold lightly pats her on her head.
Arnold: âIt was your winâ
Muir: ââŚEh? R-Really?â
Muirâs eyes gradually widen as Arnoldâs words start to sink in. Arnold nods his head again.
Arnold: âYeah, you did really wellâ
Hearing those words, the realization that she had won starts welling up inside her and she began to get teary.
Muir: âUu⌠Uuu⌠Iâm so glaaadâ
She must have truly felt happy. Up until now she had been nothing more than a burden, and she was afraid that she would ruin the chance Arnold gave her to be able to train under the best master.
However, she won the game and was to learn how to fight from Rarashik. She started to cry tears of joy thinking about how she could finally be of use to Arnold and Hiiro.
Hiiro: âHey, chibi. You might have won the game, but this is only the startâ
(TL: chibi = midget; rude way to address kids or people shorter than yourself)
Arnold glares at Hiiro, as if to say he didnât need to say that right now. Ignoring Arnold, Rarashik adds onto Hiiroâs words.
Rarashik: âWell, I lost so Iâll train the jou-chan, but if I ever feel like she doesnât have what it takes Iâm going to throw her outâ
(TL: jou-chan = little girl)
Arnold: âNo way!â
Arnold: âS-Shishou! Please train her until the end!â
(TL: shishou = master)
Rarashik: âDonât say something so spoiled! Iâll certainly train her, but I donât have the free time to waste on someone who canât do something no matter how much I teach her!â
Arnold: âUgh⌠ButâŚâ
Muir: âItâs fine, oji-sanâ
(TL: oji-san = uncle; male adult)
Arnold: âM-Muir?â
Muir: âItâs as Hiiro-san and Rarashik-san says. I canât be spoiled foreverâ
Arnold: ââŚâ
Muir: âI decided to become stronger. So Iâll do my best! Iâll do my best to become stronger! And then I want to be able to stand next to oji-san and Hiiro-san!â
There wasnât an ounce of hesitation in Muirâs words. In her words, Arnold felt a strong determination. She was that serious.
Arnold: (âŚGin. This girl is exactly like youâŚ)
In this cute girlâs face, Arnold also saw traces of an old acquaintance. Especially the eyes full of determination after one decides what to do. Those eyes were exactly the same as that personâs.
Arnold: ââŚShishou, please take care of herâ
Arnold politely bows while saying so. Muir staggers while standing up and bows deeply as well.
Muir: âIâll be in your care!â
Looking at those two, Rarashik giggles.
Rarashik: âMy training is strict. Arnold-boya over there can vouch for that. If youâre still willing to train under me, then call me shishou from now onâ
(TL: boya = boy)
Muir: âY-Yes! Shishou-sama!â
Muir answers energetically. Rarashik nods as if satisfied by her response. Arnold sighs with relief, as if he had just finished an important job.
Rarashik: âBy the way, Arnold, what are you going to do?â
Arnold: âYes?â
Rarashik: âAre you going to train with this girl too?â
Arnold: âUm⌠Is that⌠No good?â
Arnold tries to take advantage of the opportunity. Arnold had also planned to become stronger by coming back. Rarashik glares at him for a bit, but sighs and shrugs.
Rarashik: âWell, one person, two people, thereâs no difference. Back when I was still in active duty, my disciples said especially stupid thingsâ
Hiiro: âOh, is that so?â
Hiiro opens his eyes a little. Arnold responded to his question.
Arnold: âI told you, right? She is the one who created <<Binding>>. Everyone came trying to become her disciple. Rather, most of the people who stand at the top of this country are shishouâs disciplesâ
According to Arnold, the king and even the <Three Beast Saints>> were her disciples. Hearing that, Hiiro reaffirmed that this woman called Rarashik was an incredible individual.
Hiiro: âRather than that, Iâm surprised that a perverted old man like you was able to learn from herâ
Arnold: âDonât call me a pervert! Itâs been a while but you havenât forgotten about it, huh, you bastard!â
However, Hiiro was serious about his question. It wouldnât be strange to wonder how Arnold, who was neither royalty nor a citizen, but just an adventurer and a cook, came to be taught by someone so amazing.
Arnold: âW-Well, I can understand why you might ask that. I was just luckyâŚâ
Hiiro: âLucky?â
Rarashik: âI was forced to take him inâ
Arnold: âS-Shishou!â
Hearing this, Hiiro frowns and looks back and forth between the two. Muir blankly looks at them in the same way.
Rarashik: âIt was a request from an old drinking buddy. Arnold-boya was brought by that person and he asked me to look after himâ
Hiiro: âHmmmâ
Arnold: âNo, what do you mean âhmmmâ? And, if itâs just by name then you know himâ
Hiiro: âHuh?â
Arnold: âIt was Judom-sanâ
Hiiro: âJudom? If I remember correctly, heâs the kingdomâs guild master, right?â
Arnold: âYeah, thatâs rightâ
Hiiro: âI see. You said he was an acquaintance, but it was that kind of a relationshipâ
Arnold: âPretty much. I was introduced to shishou by that person, and thatâs how I came to be trained by herâ
Rarashik: âI didnât want to. I was forced to do itâ
Arnold cringed hearing those words. They were the truth so he couldnât deny it and could do nothing but became depressed.
Rarashik: âBut, itâs a pretty nostalgic story. When Arnold was young he looked so cute, unlike the old man face he has nowâ
Rarashik smiles as she recalls old memories.
Arnold: âW-Wait, shishou!â
As if embarrassed, Arnold raises his head and raises his voice.
Rarashik: âAh, by the way, what are you going to do, boya?â
Hiiro: âHa?â
Hiiro instinctively responded after being asked so suddenly.
Rarashik: âNo, Iâll be training these two, but you⌠Arnold?â
Arnold: âEh? UmâŚâ
Arnold feels troubled and scratches his head. As for why, it is because Hiiro is not a Gabranth. This training is for Gabranth to learn the ability to use <<Binding>>. However, for a human like Hiiro, there is almost no meaning to this training.
Arnold: (I mean, Hiiro canât even use <<Binding>>⌠What do I doâŚ)
Not knowing how to respond, Arnold looks towards Hiiro. Then, Hiiro answers curtly:
âI donât need itâ
Hiiro: (Iâm not some sports enthusiast. Like hell Iâm doing training for Gabranth)
Rather than that, Hiiro wanted to do more training with his <<Word Magic>>. He determined that if he were to do such supposedly strict training, he would have no time left to train on his own.
Rarashik: âHmm, I had an interest in boya, tooâ
Rarashik says so in a somewhat dejected tone.
Hiiro: (You have to be kidding me. Sheâs seen me using <<Word Magic>>. If she gets too curious sheâll happily turn me into her guinea pig)
Hiiro gets goosebumps as he thinks that. He thought that sheâll probably ask him about his magic until sheâs satisfied and run experiments on his body. He decided that he will never become a disciple of hers.
Hiiro: âHow long will the training take?â
Hiiro asked Rarashik, who turns to face Muir.
Rarashik: âHmm⌠This jou-chan herself is⌠Well, in order to train her to the level of holding her own as an adventurer, itâll take at least six months. Fortunately her level is already decent, so basic combat training, <<Binding>>, and practical techniques. With all of that, itâll take about that longâ
Hearing that it would take six months, Hiiro had already come to a decision. He turns to face Arnold and Muir.
Hiiro: âIs that so. Then, this is goodbyeâ
Muir gasped and looked sad, while Arnold shrugged as if to say âI thought soâ.
Arnold: âI thought so. Well, it canât be helpedâ
Arnold has already given up, but Muir hasnât and begins to talk.
Muir: âW-Why? Even if you donât train, why donât you stay in this country?â
Hiiro: âSorry, but I have my own goalsâ
Muir: âG-Goals?â
Hiiro: âYeah, to see the world. I canât sit idly by for six monthsâ
Muir looks downcast hearing Hiiroâs words. It was only for a short time, but looking into Hiiroâs eyes she understood that he wasnât the kind of person to change his mind just by listening to other people.
She understood that she couldnât do anything about it. Looking at her, Arnold has a bitter smile on his face. He knew that Hiiro was that kind of person so he wasnât surprised, but to Muir, he was someone who journeyed with them together, and she was sad to see him leave.
If you look closely they may seem like family, but they are of different races, and Hiiro definitely doesnât think of them as family. But Muir took a liking to Hiiro. If she were to honestly say so, she didnât want the person who was like an older brother to her to leave.
However, they knew that Hiiro would never change his mind once he decided something.
Arnold: (I donât think we can bait him to stay six months with foodâŚ)
Arnold thought that, noticing that Hiiro shows an abnormal tenacity when it comes to food, but decided it was impossible and shook his head.
Arnold: ââŚHey, Hiiro. What are you going to do from now on?â
Hiiro: âGood question. After taking a little time to gather information Iâll take a look around the continent, and after thatâŚâ
Hiiro was in the middle of talking, but noticing Rarashik was looking towards them with a curious expression on her face, he stopped.
Hiiro: ââŚIs none of your businessâ
Arnold: ââŚHaa, I thought soâ
Arnold says so, but he had also noticed Rarashik staring at them and didnât press him further.
Arnold: (Heâs probably going to the Evilaâs continent. Heâs said something about it before)
If Rarashik had heard that, sheâd probably ask about how he plans to get there, how is a Gabranth going to get there, and it would become troublesome. Because the two races had just been fighting a war with each other.
That being the case, Hiiro and Arnold decided to keep that to themselves. Sure enough, Rarashik frowned as if dissatisfied.
Towards the Muir who was depressed until now, Hiiro looks at her as if looking down on her.
Hiiro: âHey, chibiâ
She twitches, then slowly looks up. Their eyes meet.
Hiiro: âIn six months, if I become bored Iâll come back. Until them, make sure you become somewhat usefulâ
Hiiro didnât plan to say these words. Curiously, looking at her being depressed, Hiiro became annoyed. He didnât know whether he was annoyed towards her, or himself.
However, listening to his words, Muir smiled, and he felt as if the tense mood had relaxed a little.